Shallow but good!
It's a pretty good, laid back song. Work on variation though!
Thanks for the comment. I was just having a mess about with some new sounds I created. This is a mere 30 minutes of work tops.
You might want to look into "Limiters" though. Heard some pretty bad clipping there - and whily dynamics are nice, too much are plain bothersome. Otherwise it's a good song!
Cut the reverb
While it might sound epic, it takes the substance from your song.
Effects are like Salt - too much and it's hard to swallow.
Otherwise I'm not sure since it sounds quite a lot like you used a MIDI and just put some VSTi on there - i could be wrong, therefore 7 instead of 0.
I would probably have missed it - but your mastering is way too bad for someone who's able to make music without Samples.
Only problem is the Arp that comes in around 2:30... not the arp itself, rather its' melody. Otherwise great job!
Lots of Potential
I'd say stop building it up and add a bridge when you add in the Arp and just go for a "all in" where your whole instrumental setup starts playing, leading into the chorus - that way you give the listeners some gratifiction for their patience with the starting pad - which is very nicely put together btw!
Thanks!! I am adding lots of other instruments, and i am going to make the intro pad more interesting and dynamic for the intro.
I expected it to build up a LOT more though. Definately room for improvement.
Thank you for the feedback! I redid the song and built it up more and reposted it! Plz check it out
Shows not a single bit of anything that makes music great. You've got absolutely no depth, no rythm no nothing. Learn to limit, equalize and take time for your music!
Zero... Now I seen everything.
It lacks depth though. It doesn't really feel like an underground adventure, more like a plane diving through clouds.
You could've done alot more with this. What you did is very good though.
I'm on cloud 7. Successful Ambient.
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